Friday, April 16, 2010

Here I am ....

The night has just begun

I travel alone, places to the world unknown

Sin or salvation I’ve never known

My mind devoid of emotions

Only thing I’ve ever known

I write my own destiny

Here I am The king of the unknown

Since birth I have seen

With other’s dreams your destiny sown

Have nothing else but a mind I call my own

Through moral sins my life has shone

I write my own destiny

Here I am the king of the unknown

Unprepared untested in this world we are thrown

The endless struggle to own the throne

Made desperate to own the throne

No pride no guilt

To the world the talent to be shown

I have nothing else but a mind of my own

Here I am, the king of the unknown

5 comments:

Vaibhaav said...

good work, the write up does not specify an exact mood of the writer but for first timer its really appreciable.

Bipasha said...

Tu kavi bhi ban gaya? Not bad at all!

Gaurav said...

thanks guys , first post of this kind. unedited and did not work on it, wrote the first words that came to mind (actually copied what i had written on a tissue paper)

SagarN said...

Gud one taklooman....

1aim1india said...

This is good work.. I love this line "Since birth I have seen With other’s dreams your destiny sown". Super! Keep writing and posting..!